I already ordered an essay on studybay and the outcome was really poor in fact I received an E on the essay that i handed in for the first draft. I am searching for a person who has already worked with the IB program for the theory of knowledge essay and knows what to do to get a good grade, at least a B! In this essay that i have already ordered there are several things missing that i previously asked. I will attach to you the feedbacks that the professor gave me and to the entire class. I will attach the essay that was corrected by the teacher with all his tips to do better and improve it. Feel free to change anything in the essay that the teacher has marked as wrong. Moreover in the essay there are many things missing: – knowledge questions: questions regarding to the title but to form a question about knowledge, the question should relate to the areas of knowledge that i have included in the essay. This question is crucial and should be inserted in the introduction. It should be a question related to title in the real life (do some research on what is a knowledge question) – Claims and counterclaims: these are essential and in my previous essay they were not formed well, the first example that i have on alien presence needs more support and needs to be better supported, an article on the n.y. times by dennis overbye. Then the presence of scientific studies must be proved. This topic needs to be reframed. The second topic that i talked about was about the area ok knowledge pf human sciences, more precisely about religion. I made an example that was theoretical, real and proved examples must be made about real stories. Claims and counterclaims about knowledge must be inserted into these two. – All claims and counterclaims must have justification – Moreover implications about the topics must be inserted, these are essential, try to find some controversy and something that could go against the knowledge question The title of my essay is title number 2, here there are some tips on how to approach it. http://www.ibtokessaytutor.com/ibtokessaytopics/May2018/ibtokessaytitlesMay2018.shtml#ibtokessayMay2018topic2 The writer can change what he/she wants in the essay but needs to do it well and according to the tok essay format. This is the required format: https://ibmastery.mykajabi.com/blog/how-to-structure-a-theory-of-knowledge-essay Please follow the guidelines, they are strictly required