 The main idea is clearly established and fully developed with specific details and examples.  Organization is notably logical and coherent.  Focus is consistently maintained.  Vocabulary and sentence structure are varied and effective.  Errors in sentence structure, usage, and mechanics are few and insignificant. o Determine the purpose of writing to task and audience. o Provide a section that effectively introduces the topic. o Formulate a relevant thesis or claim. o Organize ideas and details effectively. o Provide adequate, relevant support by citing ample textual evidence; response may also include anecdotal experience for added support. o Use of a variety of transitional devices effectively throughout and within a written text o Demonstrate proficient use of college-level, standard written English (e.g., varied word choice, syntax, language conventions, semantics). o Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from, or supports, the argument or information presented. o Use a variety of sentence patterns effectively. o Maintain consistent point of view. o Apply the conventions of standard English (e.g., avoid inappropriate use of slang, jargon, clichés). I need the attached essay reviewed edited and revised. No more then 500 words 4 paragraphs.