Admission Essay

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nAdmission Essay

nFor a long time I have dreamed to become a legal advisor. Where others could see the difficulties, time-involving activities and concentrations in this profession, I could only see the excitement. In my initial career as a Marine Corp, I felt that I had no passion for this job. With a long-term interest in legal excellence, this inspiration brought me to different colleges to study. At one point in my life, I witnessed great legal counsels who helped many people in the criminal justice system in the United States. At first, I felt that studying the course in the university would be hectic, but with my determination, I felt more involved than ever. In this regard, my aspiration to study the course has brought me to this college.

nWhen I was engaged in legal studies, others felt that they were in the wrong profession but I remained enthusiastic. In every moment, I reminded myself of the need to remain focused. Sure enough, my motivation began to bear fruits. I overcome the notion that this is a difficult profession and I was destined for success. During my current criminal justice studies, things started to be interesting. In these sessions, I spent my time working with legal advisors and counsels, which ensured that I enjoyed every moment of it. Thanks to this experience, I understand that this institution is my future, because via it, I will pursue my passion in life.

nAlthough in my previous profession at Marine Corp in the United States, days were hard and long, my determination inspired me to study criminal justice. Most notably, my current course in criminal justice will go a long way to help me achieve much in the pre law field in this college. My love for legal experience will act as an inspiring tool to contribute passionately to my area of study.

nAdditionally, I am attracted to this university for other factors. The institution will provide the opportunity to collaborate with the diverse group of students that the institution passionately accommodates – and who share my principles. I understand that from professional experience at Marine Corp that to accomplish success, honesty and trust that this institution values, new friends are required to establish new values. I feel that my knowledge in criminal justice will offer an inventive approach in the colleges pursuit of knowledge that will assist me to succeed in my academics.

nPre law studies are crucial field that gives me an opportunity to advance my skills and help people with criminal justice issues. The institution provides a seamless interaction between the law profession and the learners. It has also succeeded in creating an academic niche for every student in the pre law courses. In this respect, the college is not only the right place for me, but also my only learning environment. Most important, I believe that I can personally contribute to establishing a scholarly climate that produces an intellectual curiosity.

nAt the department of pre law in the college, I can continue to follow the path towards legal excellence. Having long value in pre legal merit, I believe that this college would be my best choice to nurture my love for pre law field. In this respect, I have only tried to succeed in this dynamic field, thus I understand that my limited time at this college will advance my potential in a limitless manner.

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nWork cited

nAsher, Donald. Graduate Admissions Essays, Fourth Edition. New York: Ten Speed Press, 2013. Print.

nEhrenhaft, George. Writing A Successful College Application Essay. Hauppauge, NY: Barron’s, 2008. Print.