“we require that you submit an updated statement of intent essay that more clearly demonstrates your decision to apply to the AAS Fashion Design program. This essay must be a full page in length and should include a longer description of your academic background and your specific interest in the AAS Fashion Design program. Please ensure that you have taken the time to edit and check your essay for proper spelling, grammar, and punctuation. This essay is a reflection of your written ability for the program and should demonstrate that you can succeed in a rigorous academic setting which will include reading and writing courses in addition to design classes.” According to this im going to upload what i wrote and i want you to add more professional info and fix it for me. i want to be so professional and using the right structure for statement of intent essay . If you need to ask me any question im here.